golden dust


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Posted by karin on April 25, 2002 at 02:13:59:


Swirl of golden dust,
the street-sweeping machine works
in early spring beam.
Honking doesn´t bother me
as I feel joy in my heart


This is a tanka; two extra lines with 7+7 syllables.

With regards from Sweden.
Karin



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